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Just a poetry geek that happens to also like rapping.
Hello. I am simply a beaner that likes to rap. I wouldn't even call myself a rapper per se, I'm a writer. However, ever since I heard "Hard Knock Life" by Jay-Z when I was 5, I fell in love with hip-hop. I could tell you many things, hype myself up to make me look like a star...but I will let the music speak for itself. I could tell you a bunch of stuff about my tracks but...just shut up and listen, shut up and listen son.
Song Info
Genre
Hip-Hop • Positive Vibes
Charts
Peak #218
Peak in subgenre #16
Rights
Jose A. Ortega 2012
Uploaded
September 10, 2012
Track Files
MP3
MP3 4.3 MB • 160 kbps • 3:46
Lyrics
Spontaneous lyrics on a sleepless night But tell me what the hell am I supposed to write When I feel so empty inside? I can't face the world, please let me hide The world up close is making me sick to my stomach I have mountains of doubt ahead, but don't have The energy to ever reach the summit I've tried it before and all I did was plummet Back down to the base I honestly don't have what it takes to face That again, at least not today So I'm just patiently waiting for it all to go away Hey, what am I supposed to say? I have no motivation to get out of this situation It takes all of my concentration To get me through the daily struggle It seems everyone is building new things While I'm still stuck in the ruins and rubble Some nights I feel like I'm the only one of my type And the way I see the world through my eyes Is so goddamn hard to describe (He-yy) I'm numb, so numb I don't feel a f*** ing thing It's not fun, no fun Not even when I sing (He-yy) It's become apparent That my soul is barren Maybe all this is inherent To my character, The whole world is staring And I'm afraid I just can't meet Their expectations I no longer have aspirations I've reached my limitations So fulfilling my dreams has become Another one of the obligations My trains of thought are derailed Before they reach their destinations This corroding cancer is eating away At my very foundations And those close to me notice, and want explanations So that leads to awkward conversations But it's like we speak different languages, failed communications So it strains our relations They try to help, but will never feel these sensations They say the sun comes out after the storm But I have BEEN waiting, I've lost my patience Some nights I feel like I'm the only one of my type And the way I see the world through my eyes Is so goddamn hard to describe (He-yy) I'm numb, so numb I don't feel a f*** ing thing It's not fun, no fun Not even when I sing (He-yy) I don't feel good, I don't feel bad I can't find happiness but I'm not even sad I lost my inner peace yet I'm not mad I lost my ability to cry And it's been so long ever since I laughed I don't look forward to the future I don't care about the past I don't want anything at all I can't regain what I had Seems like I'm going nowhere fast There's a black hole in my soul And daily it grows It's clearly taking its toll The fire within has been extinguished Don't be surprised that I'm cold It's a desert inside, no sun, no rain No savior is coming, there's no one to blame The things that I loved no longer feel the same Has art abandoned me? It used to be there during tough times I'd write or play a beat And it'd calm my mind But now I'm sitting here with a pen and pad And all I see are blank lines Some nights I feel like I'm the only one of my type And the way I see the world through my eyes Is so goddamn hard to describe (He-yy) I'm numb, so numb I don't feel a f*** ing thing It's not fun, no fun Not even when I sing (He-yy)
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Jerry Vicious
Sep 28, 2012
Ur writing is getting better man, ur concepts are coming together nicely, ur maturing. Ur flow is better too, just keep working at it, because ur a damn good artist. The hook, I think it could've been better, I love the idea and the concept. Actually, by the end of the song, the hook sounded pretty good, not the best but good...really good song overall man
SemiMotoBeatz
Sep 25, 2012
I agree 100% with b mize on this one bro nice track just if you paced your self when spiiting it wont sound like it clashes, i do like where you toke the song though and it did have some nice lines
B-MIZE
Sep 14, 2012
Hey Capo. Well here is my review, I'll be as honest as possible as I want to see you get better with each track. Love the beat first of all, really suits the story and feeling behind the song. Verses are great Capo, you're getting a lot better at staying on beat with your flow, but I still think you're getting ahead of yourself when you're rapping. Try to slow down and write material with gives you enough time to prepare for the next line whilst recording. But still getting better my dude. Chorus: Well, I like the idea you have and the switch up of styles with the powerful/gentle voice alternating but I think this is the weakest part of the track. There are times within the hook where you're off beat and a little off melody. But like I said I do like the concept and the way you tried a new idea! Well done big C. Peace out. B-Mize